#1 Project Update

This is my work for the final crit.

1. Script

I’ve finished my script.

2. Storyboard

#2 Feedback

Then after the comments and feedback, I need to focus on my models and sketches in my storyboard, and how I will demonstrate the navigation and interaction.

Also I need to do story revising, my story was pointed some logic problems which I need to think more.

1.Why only cards get transparent? (I was suggested to set a switch button or add a setting like the eye can know your deeper desire)

2.Player need to see their body during experience (I was suggested to use a mirror)

Then I need to think about my report writing. I think studying why this is suitable for VR will be helpful for my story writing. My initial idea is the visual layers in VR. And I will think more about it.