#1 Project Update

I’ve finished the script writing and I need to focus on the storyboard.

Since the last tutorial, I’ve revised my script based on Ana’s suggestions and current problems.

1. Think about how long will the player to explore and experience my story.

2. Use V.O.

a.tell the player who is the hero (intro)

b.convey the experience set to the player – what you need to do but you can’t, which it’s intentional rather than a bug

c.tell the player what you need to do (can’t only write what the hero is doing)

#2.Reflection

Here is the problem I solved during the last tutorial,

1. How to show the transition of ACT three structure

2. How to describe a change during a period

And I still met some questions during I writing the script, and I need to work on my experience creation, including the storyboard and timeline sheet.